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The empty void that cannot be filled
The sweet and bitter sorrow
Knowing that things just simply won't
Get any better tomorrow

The feeling that makes you want to scream
Until the bloody day is done
As you throw those love letters away
One by one

Canít forget the good times
Canít pretend the fun was all a lie
Canít wish I didnít remember
Because it hurts when he walks by

Reminiscing all the while
The laughs, the smiles, the secrets
Memories and hopes shattered
While my broken heart still frets

Standing here all alone
Youíd think the pain would dull
But singing all the songs in the world
These thoughts reverberate against my skull

Seems like itís been forever
My soul wonít seem to mend
Sometimes I wish Iíd go numb
Sometimes I wish my life would end

No light at the end of this tunnel
Pitch black, all I can see
Wonder when this feeling will go
If Iíll ever run free

Free of the guilt, the shame
Free of the rejection
Free to be a butterfly
No longer under your inspection

You know, I know
That time will always heal
Thereíll be a sweet end
My heart will be yours to steal
I think most of us have felt this way, at some point or another, right? I dunno, I just felt like writing about it.

Update: May 13, 2012
Wow, I'm floored that since I wrote this angst-filled poem in high school eight years ago, 803 people have read it. That's 100 people a year. Thank you so much. I never though a poem written by me would be read by 803 people. Breakups still feel this way, but the person this was written about is a distant memory. It's funny - time really does heal all wounds!
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lexifish12 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel this way and I'm in 7th grade.... I broke up with him, and I fell as though I made the biggest mistake in my life....
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I've felt like this for two months and still counting
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anime-wolfy-luva Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
Ur rite bout most ppl feelin this at one point. Wats wierd is tht everyone thinks love hurts but it's actually the rejection and pain of NOT being loved tht hurts, y'know?
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skulblaka-adurna Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2009
Beautiful poem. And I think you're right. Everyone feels this way at one time or another. And it never seems to end. Wonderful poem about a painful time we all experience at one point in life.
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nitingarg Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2007
beautiful!! amazing!
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BeckyRose Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007  Hobbyist
I've certainly felt it.

Beautifully written.
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ShearerM4 Featured By Owner May 12, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow ... i'm really glad I came upon this almost by coincidence today over a year after submitted.
Great rythm and the power is overwhealming :+fav:
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themooncalf Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
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PinkSiri07 Featured By Owner May 4, 2004   Traditional Artist
Nice work shanny! ^-^ I like!
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